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Character Request!(2nd)

Post by Entoru on 6/11/2014, 12:55 am

Could you please add Yoshii Akihisa from Baka to test to shoukanjuu?




Source : Baka to test to shoukanjuu
Akihisa is the Lord of Idiocy, and he is also from F class aside from that he is also the  Punishment Inspector, which means his summoned avatar can interact with physical objects, but as his summoned being is damaged, he too will take the same amount of that damage. Yoshii Akihisa is the kind of person that will always come through in the end, at most times, he isn't  reliable, but he still tries his best to get the job done.



Basic Skill: Punishment Inspector's Avatar

Info : Punishment Inspector is the duty he has because of what trouble he's caused
Ability Type : Active, Summon
Ability Effect : Summon's Avatar
Cast Time : Instant
Cast Range : None


Effect : Summon's Akihisa's Avatar for 25/30/35/40 seconds, Akihisa's avatar has an 1.0 base attackspeed, 50/75/100/125 damage, 500/750/1000/1250 HP, 3/6/9/12/15 armor and assists Akihisa in combat.As his levels up it gains skills( Level 1: Blink strikes a target for 100/200/300/400 Damage, 600 range ; 2: has a 30/60/90% cleave damage, 450 radius; 3 : Gains additional 5/10 armor; 4 : has a 15% chance to critical x2.5 damage)
 
Cooldown : 45/50/55/60 seconds.




Q: Jealousy
Info : Massive amounts of jealousy energy dwells within Akihisa just waiting to explode,Akihisa will release this energy only against happy couples. 
Ability Type : Target, Line
Ability Effect : Damage
Cast Time : Instant
Cast Range : 800/850/900/950/1000 units


Effect : Shoots a beam of jealousy dealing 150/300/450/600/750 Damage, If Summoned Being is present, Avatar will shoot a second beam in the same direction dealing 200/300/400/500/600 additional damage.
Cooldown :  32/29/26/23/20 seconds.



W: Punishment Inspector's Training
Info : Due to Akihisa's training gained through becoming a Punishment Inspector, he has a higher physical ability than normal students.
Ability Type : Passive, Buff
Ability Effect : Buff Self
Cast Time : -
Cast Range:-


Effect : Grants Akihisa additional 150/300/450/600/750 HP,15/30/45/60/75% attack speed, 2/4/6/8/10% movement speed, grants his Avatar an increased 20/40/60/80/100% attack speed, and 5/10/15/20/25% movement speed.
Cooldown : - 




E: Summon Field
Info : Akihisa can create summon fields that suit his own beneficial use, because he can choose what subject that field is
Ability Type : Creates Field
Ability Effect : Buff, Debuff
Cast Time : Instant
Cast Range : 600 AoE around user


Effect : Summons a field around the user for 10/14/18/22/26 seconds, while within the field, Allies gains 5/10/15/20/25 health regeneration, while enemies lose 25/35/45/55/65 health per second.
Cooldown : 30/34/38/42/46 seconds.


R : Focused Mind
Info : Akihisa uses up a year's worth of his brainpower to complete whatever his goal is.
Ability Type : Active, No target
Ability Effect : Buff 
Cast Time : Instant
Cast Range : -


Effect : Akihisa momentarily gains maximum movement speed, magic immunity, and 150/300/450 damage for 10/15/20 seconds.
Cooldown : 40/45/50 seconds.


I've also made a model for akihisa, Again i'm no professional, but here it is...


Model =  http://speedy.sh/QxJBp/Yoshii-Akihisa.mdx
Skin  = http://speedy.sh/yz2rZ/Yoshii-Akihisa-Skin.blp


Thanks for reading.. just a suggestion....
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Re: Character Request!(2nd)

Post by L4_Suicide on 11/17/2014, 3:48 am

Since this is a character requesting topic, i'm gonna ask here. Forgive me if i do something wrong.

Could you please add Heart Aino from Arcana heart series?

Source: Arcana Heart
Heart aino is a cheerful and innocent girl that has a enourmous heart.
Been able to see arcana since she was little, her mother encouraged
the faith on them and now she became friends with one of the most
powerful arcana, Partinias. Together, they will stop the forces of evil
with the pure and contagius power of love.


Basic skill: Partinias's Helping Hand
Ability type: Passive
Ability Effect: Buff Self
Cast time: Instant
Cast range: -

Info: Partinias helps Heart when she is in a pinch.
Effect: Heart gains [100 x AGI] of movement speed when it has 300 or lower HP.

Cooldown: None



Q: Iron fist
Ability type: Active
Ability Effect: Damage
Cast time: Instant
Cast range: 100/200/250/300/400 units
Mana cost: 50/60/70/80/90

Info: Heart delivers a punch filled with love.
Effect: Heart travels from a distance to its target, doing[25/30/45/50/55 x 0.7 x STR] of attack damage in enemy creeps and [50/60/70/80/100 x 0.6 x STR] to enemy heroes.

Cooldown: 30/25/20/15/10 seconds



W: Ring Beam
Ability type: Active
Ability effect: Damage, Debuff
Cast time: Instant
Cast range: 100/200/250/300/400 units
Mana cost: 30/40/50/60/70

Info: Heart asks for some of Partinias's power to fire a ring shaped beam.
Effect: Heart fires a beam with 200 of AoE and does [30/45/60/75/90 x 0.4 INT] of damage to all enemy units. If a enemy hero is hit, Their movement speed decreases for [0.2 x
Enemy Hero AGI].

Cooldown: 25/21/17/15



E: Extend Force
Ability type: Field
Ability effect: Buff Self, Debuff
Cast time: Instant
Cast Range: 400 AoE
Duration: 8 seconds
Mana cost: 45/60/75/90/105

Info: Partinias teleports Heart and her enemy to the Elemental World.
Effect: Heart creates a field that traps enemies and raises her Movement Speed, Attack Damage, and Health Regen for 30% each and decreases enemies Movement Speed And Attack Speed for 20%. Units caught in the field cannot leave the area until the field dispels or Heart is beaten. Lasts for 8 seconds(all versions).



R: Amazing Iron Fist of Love
Ability type: Active
Ability effect: Damage, Debuff
Cast Time: Instant
Cast range: 300/400/500/600/700 units
Duration: 3 seconds(startup)
Mana cost: 90/110/130/140/150

Info: Heart puts all of her love and strength in a cheerful and deadly punch.
Effect: Heart chases an enemy hero and if it reaches close, Heart punches the oponent
upwards and punches it again downwards, dealing[300/400/500/600/700 x 0.6 x STR]of damage and stunning for 3 seconds. If Heart does not reach the enemy hero in time, the skill is cancelled.

Cooldown:100/85/70 seconds

Well, that's it. I'm not that good in balancing, so there will be some inconsistencies. Let me know ways i can improve the character. Thanks.


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Re: Character Request!(2nd)

Post by Fikwriter on 11/20/2014, 7:49 am

Might as well bump in. Not writing the background yet, as it's too boring, and I already have skills set.
Should also mention for everyone else, that there are a basic template for writing suggestions in the ABCD main discussion, so you better check it out.

And here goes:

Heiwajima Shizuo
Ikebukuro's Strongest
(Durararara!)



Strength Type
 
Attack: 5
Magic: 7
Defense: 8
Speed: 4
Disable: 10
Support : 0

 
Fighter
 
 
Special: Inhuman Strength
Shizuo possess incredible strength, due to his brain not limiting the output of his power. Because of this, he suffered a lot of traumas and managed to strengthen his body, becoming incredibly endurable. This strength allows him to survive most of injuries and overcome any obstacle.
•••
Whenever Shizuo takes damage that is equal or more than 50% of his current health, this damage is lowered by 30%. (EX: he have 2000 health, takes spell to 1000 health, suffers only 700)
When disabled (stunned, slowed, silenced, etc) Shizuo can overcome all negative effects and boost his movement speed by 45 and armor by 15 for next 2.5 seconds.
Manacost: 150
Cooldown: 35 seconds

 
 
1st skill: Post Sign Strike
Enraged, Shizuo grabs first thing that comes in his view, for example, a post sign. As his weapon of choice it's quite heavy... And deadly, with no doubt.
•••
Enhances next attacks to deal 75/95/115/135/155/175 + STR damage on the 200 AoE and slow enemies for 99% for 0.1 seconds each strike. His Attack range increases from Melee to 250 for this time. 
Duration: 3 attacks or 8 seconds
Manacost: 150
Cooldown: 16 seconds
 
 
2nd skill: A Flying Vending Machine
Shizuo throws a vending machine, usually, to hit Izaya for the death... Luckily or unluckily, he usually misses. That's a threat, though... A flying vending machine...
•••
After 0.75 seconds throws a vending machine to the target location (possibly, with the parabolic trajectory). Deals 100/250/400/550/700 + 6xSTR damage in the 300 AoE (150 AoE Full damage, from 150 to 300 – only half) up to the 2000 range. Stuns for the 2 seconds (1 on the borders). Projectile speed: 650.
(Due to the low projectile speed, it’s very difficult to hit enemy for the full damage, but if you manage to do so, it totally worth it)

Manacost: 145 + 15 per level
Cooldown: 23 seconds
 
 
3rd skill: Rage Throw
Shizuo grabs the one, who got him angry and throws over himself. 
•••
Grabs an enemy of 180 range or less and throws over himself for 250 range. Upon landing, target is damaged by 160/300/440/580/720 + 1.5xSTR
Manacost: 120 + 30 per level
Cooldown: 19 seconds
 


Ultimate: I-z-a-y-a!!!
...
Just don't stay on his way. Seriously. 
•••
Shizuo charges towards chosen path, for the 1250 range, with max movement speed, ignoring units and obstacles and disable effects. (Red “bloodlust” power effect should surround him, so the enemies would know Shizuo is charging) If a hero is on his path (within 150 AoE at least), Shizuo will grab him and drag with him, dealing 75/100/125 damage per 125 units of distance, until max range is achieved. After that, Shizuo punches an enemy, dealing 1400/1950/2500 + 12.5xSTR damage and knocks him for 250 distance, stunning for 0.25 seconds per each 125 distance he was dragged.
Deals 650/900/1150 damage to the non-hero units on his path.

If target dies, Shizuo gains 60/90/120 movement speed for 3 seconds.
Manacost: 200/400/600
Cooldown: 90/110/130
 
 
Skill levelNormal


Reasons:
Pros:
High disable count. All his abilities either stun, slow or drag enemies along for your team to follow with certain kill
Strong tank – due to the special skill, it’s unlikely that any high damage skill will finish him.
Ultimate – extremely strong to initiate and disable a carrying character for quite a long time. Quite useful as a kill button to one-shot weak opponent of have a full strength build.
Good in farming early game

Cons:
Difficult to hit W
Inability to fight 1 to 1 – Shizuo is kind of tanky character, but lucks pure damage.
Very easy to miss your Ultimate if initiate from a long distance

Quite weak late game, as efficiency of his spells lowers, leaving only CC which counts
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Re: Character Request!(2nd)

Post by Fikwriter on 11/20/2014, 8:02 am

Another one, just to make even count =3

Jack the Ripper
Assassin of Black
(fate/apocrypha)



 
Agility Type
 
Attack: 7
Magic: 9
Defense: 1
Speed: 9
Disable: 5
Support : 0

 
Assassin
 
 
Special: Misty Night Murderer
Jack the Ripper was infamous for killing his victims without them being able to defend themselves. Apparently, Assassin always strikes first, regardless of situation.
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First attack to the enemy deals 250% critical damage and silences for 1.45 seconds.
Can't occur on the same hero target twice in 8 seconds and 2 seconds for creeps interval. 
Passive.


 
1st skill (Q): Presence Concealment
Mana: 120/160/200/240/280
Cooldown: 40/37/34/31/28 seconds
As an Assassin, Jack is able to hide  her presence from enemies' eyes, rendering invisible for everyone's view.
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After a 4/3.5/3/2.5/2 seconds delay becomes invisible for 6/8/10/12/14 seconds and increase movement speed by 25/35/45/55/65. Her invisibility fails if she runs in distance less than 50 to enemy hero. First attack after or during invisibility activates Misty Night Murderer and also slows target for 20/30/40/50/60% for 1.45 seconds.
 
 
2nd skill (-): Expert Surgery
According to the story of Jack the Ripper, famous murderer used to dismember and rip apart victims' body in no time, but with great precision. As a Servant, Assassin uses this skills to rip enemies' hearts and feast on it.
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Assassin's attacks damage deal 0.2/0.4/0.6/0.8/1xAGI damage to any enemy who is slowed, stunned, etc.
After kill of enemy or creep devours it's heart, restoring (20/30/40/50/60+ 5% of victim's Max HP) mana.
 
Passive.
 

3rd skill (E): Maria the Ripper 
Mana: 50/75/100/125/150
Cooldown: 0.5
Noble Phantasm, which comes out from Assassins true name. This Phantasm is formed as four butcher knifes. This knifes were used by Jack to rip and dismember his victims. They are overly dangerous while being used against women in the misty night.
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Throws knife - 500 range, 75 AoE, 250 projectile speed. Deals damage according to three conditions: night, mist, female target.
If 0 conditions met: 40/80/120/160/200 +1.25xAgility physical damage (this value is set as Normal damage), 15% move speed slow
If 1 condition: 2xNormal damage (magical), 25% move speed slow
If 2 conditions: 3xNormal damage (magical), 35% move speed slow
If 3 conditions met: 3xNormal damage (True), 30% attack and move speed slow
It takes 10 seconds to retrieve each knife, up to 4 knifes.


Ultimate (R): The Mist - Darkened Mist Metropolis
Mana: 500/600/700
Cooldown: 120/100/80
Assassin's Noble Phantasm, that resembles Acid Smoke of London in 1800's. Enemies, who are trapped inside this Phantasm lost their sense of direction and begin to suffocate, without being able to left misty area
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Creates a 750 AoE mist for 5/6/7 seconds, which reduces trapped enemies speed by 15/20/25% and deals 125/145/165 + 4% of Enemy's Max HP damage per second (1.25x damage for creeps). Inside The Mist Misty Night Murderer cooldown decreased to 4 seconds, Expert Surgery recover not only mana but HP by the same amount.
Jack is permanently invisible inside the mist, but can be damaged via AoE spells. 
 
Skill levelLunatic
 
Reasons:
Pros:
Able to deal extreme damage with her full combo. While striking enemy after invisibility, she will apply slow and silence, completely weakening opponent. After that, just use your R and E four times in a row – that damage would be enough to evaporate your enemy instantly. It takes skill to be quick enough to do that though.
She is stealthy as heck and can chase almost any enemy to finish off.
Extremely high sustain on the map.


Cons:
Squishy. Can be easily killed with few burst damage spells.
No AoE damage. Farming is pain and leveling up early would be a pain.
Without a proper build (which is difficult because of lack of farm) her burst is much weaker
Highly dependent on her ultimate and invisibility. Without them she’s absolutely helpless.
Probably won’t help much after wasting all her E’s.
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