Character Request (Ara Haan)

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Character Request (Ara Haan)

Post by BrokenSalvation on 11/22/2014, 4:57 pm

Name: Ara Haan
Title: Sakra Devanam
Game: Elsword

Ara Haan (Sakra Devanam)
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Ara Haan (Sakra Devanam) (Eun Form)
Eun form:

Background
Background:
Ara was born from the Haan family who protected the seal of the Nine-tailed fox for generations. Despite her kind looks, she is a skilled martial artist and is proficient with the spear.

On one night, the village where Ara lived was suddenly raided by demons. To her surprise, the demon army was being led by her now corrupted brother Aren, who now calls himself Ran. As he was about to deal the final blow to her, Ara instictively took a nearby hairpin and in the next moment, a bright light shone. When she woke, Ara found herself alone in the village. Eun, the nine-tailed fox who was sealed inside the hairpin, suddenly talks to her. Forming a contract with the spirit, Ara now journeys to find her brother.

As she fought demons after demons, Ara soon came to realize that even the most kind-hearted person can become evil. Believing that her brother was inflicted by such a curse, she sought for the path of justice by demoting evil and promoting good. It was then when people took notice of her abilities was she given the title of the legendary god that rules the heavens, Sakra Devanam.

Stat type: Agility

Attribute:
Attack - [||||      ] 
Magic - [|         ]  
Defense - [|||       ]   
Speed - [||||||||||]
Disable - [||        ] 
Support - [          ]          

Attack Range: 160 (Supposed the base attack range for melee is 128)

Play style: Fighter

Mastery: Easy


DEFAULT SKILL

Eun
A fox spirit sealed on a hairpin. With it's purpose unknown, it helps Ara by giving her power.
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Everytime Ara damages an enemy with a basic attack or skill, she gains a stack of awakening gauge.
Upon reaching 40 stacks, Ara can use this skill to change form, gaining 30% attack speed, 20% movement speed, and 10% lifesteal for 15 seconds.

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Cooldown: 45 seconds
Mana cost: No mana cost

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Spell type: Transform, Buff
*Stacks will reset upon dying
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Energy Absorption
Ara releases an energy orb in front of her, sapping the spirit power of those hit.
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Deals 75/150 damage, stuns for 0.75 seconds, and burns 50 mana in a 275 AoE around her.
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Cooldown: 10 seconds
Mana cost: 40/60 mana

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Spell type: AoE, Mana Drain, Stun
Spell damage: Magic
AoE range: 275
*Levels up at level 12
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1st skill: Matchless Truth
Ara blinks from place to place while slashing and then finishes with a swing.
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Blinks randomly within the target area 5 times, dealing [15/18/21/24/27/30/33 + 15% STR] physical damage per hit.
Ends the skill with Ara blinking at the middle and doing a wide slash that covers the whole AoE, dealing [10/20/30/40/50/60/70 + 50% STR] physical damage.

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Cooldown: 12/12/12/11/11/11/10 seconds
Mana cost: 70 mana

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Spell type: AoE, Teleport
Spell damage: Physical
Total hits: 6
Cast Range: 500
AoE Range: 350
Inverval per blink: 0.2 seconds
*Enemies are dragged towards the center at the start of this skill
*No matter where Ara is when she blinks, she will damage anyone inside the AoE.
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2nd skill: Tiger Art: Rock Smash
Ara charges forward and rams to her targets, dealing damage. This skill is the opener for her secret art, Fierce Tiger.
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Charges forward in a line, dealing [60/70/80/90/100/110/120 + 100% STR] physical damage.
If it hits an enemy hero, Ara will continue to use another skill, provided she has the mana:
Tiger Claw - Slashes enemies in front of her twice dealing [5/10/15/20/25/30/35 + 5% STR] physical damage each.
Earth Axis - Performs a sidekick and a front kick to enemies in front of her dealing [5/10/15/20/25/30/35 + 5% STR] physical damage each.
Turbulent Wave - Charges forward with her spear, dragging enemies with her while dealing [10/20/30/40/50/60/70 + 20% STR] physical damage.
Fierce Tiger - Mightily slashes forward, dealing [80% STR + 100% physical attack] physical damage.

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Cooldown: 28/26/24/22/20/18/16
Mana cost:
Rock Smash - 45/50/55/60/65/70/75 mana
Other skills - 30 mana each
Fierce Tiger - No mana cost

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Spell type: Line
Spell damage: Physical
Cast range: 500
Rock Smash travel range: 500
Rock Smash ms: 700
Affected range of other skills: 175 cone in front of her
Interval per skill: 0.6 seconds
Turbulent Wave travel range: 150
Turbulent Wave MS: 500
*Ara cannot be interrupted in any of the skills
*Cooldown begins to tick after using Rock Smash
*Enemies hit by any of the skills will be unable to do any action for 1 second, for each skill, to be able to chain the rest of the skills.
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3rd skill: Brutal Piercing
When Ara attacks her targets, she has a chance to crack the target's armour and reduce their defense.
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Ara has a [8/10/12/14/16/18/20%] chance to break [1.3/1.5/1.7/1.9/2.1/2.3/2.5] armour with her basic attacks or spells. Stacks up to 8 times.
If the armour break will not proc, then the basic attack or spell will refresh the armour break status of the enemy.
Once an enemy gains 8 stacks, Ara's next basic attack on that enemy will deal 2x damage. After that, Brutal Piercing's stack count on that target falls to 6 stacks.
Effect is lost when the enemy isn't damaged by Ara within 2 seconds.

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Spell type: Passive, Debuff
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Ultimate skill:
Heavens Wrath
Ara furiously performs a barrage of slashes. As she slashes, she releases magical flower petals which greatly extends the range of the attack.
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Charges for 0.5 seconds then releases 8 slashes dealing [10/20/30/40 + 25% STR + 25% physical damage] for each slash in a 600 AoE around her. Applies a 12/16/20/24% MS slow for 0.5 seconds when hit by a slash.
Each slash will apply a stack of Brutal Piercing. Enemies hit by all slashes will receive a debuff which prolongs the effect of Brutal Piercing for 5 seconds.

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Cooldown: 60 seconds
Mana cost: 150 mana

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Spell type: AoE, Slow, Chanelling
Spell damage: Physical
AoE: 600
Interval per slash: 0.2 seconds
*Ara can be disabled while in the middle of Heaven's Wrath
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Gameplay:
Ara is a melee fighter that specializes in long fights. Eun is a great buff which increases your already high attack speed and movement speed while giving free lifesteal. Just be careful of using it since it only lasts for a short while and has a long cooldown. While she only has 1 disable, which is Energy Absorption, Ara has access to two gap closing skills. Matchless Truth is her primary way of farming and gap closing due to its low cooldown. Rock Smash on the other hand is her damaging skill, provided you are able to hit them with the initial charge. Her passive Brutal Piercing is what makes her a deadly combatant 1v1 due to being able to lower the target's defense to almost nothing and if given the chance to max the stacks inflicted, she can execute a burst of damage on her enemy. Note that since the stacks only fall to 6, Ara can immediately stack it to 8 and perform another crit. This passive also synergizes well with her multi-hit skills. Heavens Wrath can be effectively used both in 1v1 or in clashes since it can greatly reduce all the enemy team's armour long enough for your team to eliminate them, provided you were able to execute all slashes. If you were able to execute all slashes, then you can use Brutal Piercing's 2x damage to each of the afflicted enemy, dealing even more damage to them.

Statwise, Ara greatly excels in speed, average on attack, and weak on the rest. While being plagued by a weak attack damage for a fighter, her Brutal Piercing easily makes up for it. Her movement speed allows her to easily chase enemy heroes but think twice when engaging since she has small health and defense. Since her game revolves on stacking Brutal Piercing, its best to get attack speed items and strength/health/armour items.


Last edited by BrokenSalvation on 12/4/2014, 7:12 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Re: Character Request (Ara Haan)

Post by Uoyalz on 11/24/2014, 7:37 am

Following ABCD standards, you would need a scaling for spells.
If the spell deals magical damage, then it would be like "(X + X% INT) magic damage"
If the spell deals physical damage, then "(X + X% STR) physical damage"
If required, buff/debuff durations can also be scaled via AGI.

Your skillset currently lacks in details such as Cast Range and Manacost

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Re: Character Request (Ara Haan)

Post by BrokenSalvation on 11/25/2014, 6:27 am

Added damages, cooldown, etc.
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Re: Character Request (Ara Haan)

Post by Uoyalz on 11/28/2014, 1:31 pm

I'm no expert when it comes to balancing, but even I can tell that these damage can't even 1 hit arena creeps early game. The scales are ridiculously low too.

Generally, QWE should have a scalling of at least 200%(unless it's a multihit spell or spammy spell, in which case requires you to adjust accordingly), while R should have a scaling of at least 400%. As a side note, any spells that deals pure damage MUST NOT have scalling damage.

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Re: Character Request (Ara Haan)

Post by BrokenSalvation on 11/29/2014, 6:42 pm

I intended her scaling to be low to compensate for her passive, but I have to agree that Matchless Truth's farming potential sucked. Large Grin

Energy Absorption

Spoiler:
-Damage decreased from 150 to 75/150 (Levels at 12)
-Mana cost decreased from 65 to 40/60 (Levels at 12)
-Stun duration decreased from 1 second to 0.75 seconds.
-AoE decreased from 300 to 275.

*Enables Ara to use Energy Absorption more while not dealing too much damage at early levels.

Matchless Truth
Spoiler:
-Initial damage changed from [5/10/15/20/25/30/35 + 10% STR] to [15/18/21/24/27/30/33 + 15% STR]
-Cooldown decreased from 12 to 12/12/12/11/11/11/10
*This increase in damage will enable Ara to kill arena creeps early game.


Tiger Art: Rock Smash
Spoiler:
-Rock Smash damage changed from [35/70/105/140/175/210/245] to [60/70/80/90/100/110/120 + 100% STR]
-Tiger Claw damage increased from [5/10/15/20/25/30/35] to [5/10/15/20/25/30/35 + 5% STR]
-Earth Axis damage increased from [5/10/15/20/25/30/35] to [5/10/15/20/25/30/35 + 5% STR]
-Turbulent Wave damage increased from [10/20/30/40/50/60/70] to [10/20/30/40/50/60/70 + 20% STR]
-Fierce Tiger damage decreased from [100% STR + 100% attack damage] to [80% STR + 100% attack damage]
-Mana cost for Rock Smash increased from 45 to 45/50/55/60/65/70/75
-Mana cost for other skills increased from 25 to 30

*Tiger Art: Rock Smash and its component skills now deals even more damage in exchange for more mana cost.

Brutal Piercing
Spoiler:
-Max stacks reduced from 10 to 8.
-Chance to proc increased from 8/9/10/11/12/13/14% to 8/10/12/14/16/18/20%
-Armor reduction increased from 0.8/1/1.2/1.4/1.6/1.8/2 to 1.3/1.5/1.7/1.9/2.1/2.3/2.5
-Instead of falling to 9 stacks after the crit, it will now fall to 6 stacks.
-Debuff duration decreased from 2.5 seconds to 2 seconds

*After playing a few games, I found that fights don't drag for too long, so this change will reduce the time it takes for Brutal Piercing to achieve max stacks at the expense of a faster debuff duration.

Heavens Wrath

Spoiler:
-Number of slashes decreased from 10 to 8.
-Cast time decreased from 1 second to 0.5 seconds.
-Cooldown changed from 65/60/55/50 seconds to 60 seconds.
-Damage increased from [10/20/30/40 + 15% STR + 15% attack damage] to [10/20/30/40 + 25% STR + 25% attack damage]
-Slow changed from 15% to 12/16/20/24%
-AoE increased from 500 to 600.

*With the change in Brutal piercing, Heavens Wrath's total slashes were reduced while it's %damage increased. Cooldown was increased for the lower cast time.



Edit: Changed Brutal Piercing and Heavens Wrath
Edit2: Increased damage for Matchless Truth and Heavens Wrath
Edit3: Edited the first post with the changes

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